Bonsoir, j'ai fais un texte en anglais où je devais incarner un personnage choisis par mon profeseseur et décrire le Globe, j'aimerais que quelqu'un me corrige

Bonsoir, j'ai fais un texte en anglais où je devais incarner un personnage choisis par mon profeseseur et décrire le "Globe", j'aimerais que quelqu'un me corrige mon devoir. (Les phrases doivent être au présent.) Merci d'avance.

Le texte:

My name is Mona Scott, I’m a beautiful, rich, generous and charismatic lady. I am 27 years old and I am married to Edward Scott, my handsome husband. I have a lot of money thanks to my father. He is not dead yet, thank goodness. I never go to the theater alone, I’m always accompanied by my two sisters. The atmosphere at the Globe is sometimes very shocking, which is why my two sisters are with me during the plays. I don’t know why the queen accepts the poor in the theater. They’re noisy, disrespectful. But anyway, it’s still the queen. On our seats, I can see every plays correctly. But sometimes, because of the poor, these savages, I have trouble hearing the actors. Oh, and I’ve almost forgotten about Puritans. I can understand why they don’t like plays, but I love Shakespeare’s plays, especially Romeo and Juliet. I wish my husband was Romeo…