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Présentation d'un sport ! J'aimerais savoir si y'avais des fautes
Merci d'avance^^

The soccer is a team sport played with a soccer ball and goals each located opposite of the field. The players mainly use their feet to make passes, shoot and score in goals.

In America, the soccer is not very publicized and popular because of the presence of American football which takes much more place in the media. The ancestor of football was "the soule": a ball game that was played on both sides of the Channel in the Middle Ages, the word "soccer" comes from the English. The roots that this sport shares with other "football" games date back to the Middle Ages. He is the heir of the medieval soule, practiced notably in the North-West of France and in the British Isles, and Florentine Calcio, games characterized by their violence and their few rules.

Soccer is played with 22 players. 11 players per team, there are 2 teams competing against each other. Each team has a sponsor and a shirt of its own. There are 5 referees in a match. When a person makes a mistake, he receives what is called a yellow card. If the player starts again, he receives a red card which means the exclusion. A match lasts 90 minutes. At major competitions, there may be extra time after 90 minutes.
The goal of both teams is to finish the match by having scored more goals than their opponents, which means a win. A football match can result in a tie.


Soccer is a sport for all genders. Man and woman.
The rules do not change regardless of your gender.

There is equipment that all practitioners must respect that's why, it is impossible to play a professional match without these equipment.
Shin protector, crampon etc ...(modifié)

Unlike football american, the soccer is open to all and you are less likely to hurt yourself. In addition, the biggest competitions are publicized across hundreds of countries. Popular players such as Cristiano Ronaldo or Lionel Messi are watched around the world.
You want to support your nation? The most anticipated event, organized every 4 years is for you. World Cup !
More than 32 different nations compete to determine who's the best country. What do you want to play. Buy the jerseys of your favorite club and go play with.

Presented by International Sport Convention.
Love to look, like to play.

1 Réponse

  • Au debut de phrase ne met pas "The soccer" et juste "Soccer" pareil pour la suite, ne met pas "the" avant "soccer". Et au deuxieme paragraphe enleve publicized et laisse "soccer is not very popular because...". SI tu veux parler de "football" au mieux de "soccer", tu dois preciser que c'est la meme chose.

    C'est pas "Shin" mais "Chin" pour le menton.

    Voila je pense que c'est tout sauf si j'en ai raté et je suis desoler si oui.

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