Bonsoir quelques peut me corriger svp si vous pouvez reformuler certaines phrases aussi je vous remercierai si vous avez d'autre idée nésite pas svp c'est vraim

Bonsoir quelques peut me corriger svp si vous pouvez reformuler certaines phrases aussi je vous remercierai si vous avez d'autre idée nésite pas svp c'est vraiment important pour moi.

Dear Sir or Madam,

Hello my name is Hoiria I am currently a sudent in my last year of college , and I would like to integrate the european section next year, because this class would allow me to acquire a better level in English.
Acquire a good level in English is important for me because in a faw years I wish to study in Australia. A country that I find fascinating.

I am a serious person, I love learning new things and I am really confortable working with people and groups. I am also very focused, and always on Time.This class is the best opportunity for me to grow my knowledge 

I am interested in this class because I find that in the society where we live today, speaking English is an advantage that allows us to break the language barrier and therefore communicate with more people.

I am aware that this European section will increase my working time, but I feel sufficiently motivated and invested in my work to cope with it.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer. Thank you for your time and consideration. 

Sincerely.

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