bonjour à tous j'ai fais une redaction en anglais où je devais mettre (le comparatif , du preterit ,et du present perfect ) pour décrire mon appartement , po
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j'ai fais une redaction en anglais où je devais mettre (le comparatif , du preterit ,et du present perfect )
pour décrire mon appartement , pouvais me dire si j'ai bien ajouter ceux qui qui sont entre les parentheses svp car j'ai un doute
merci a tous de votre aide
I changed housing last year, in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms, my mother's is bright.
She a bed, a piece of furniture with a television, a small piece of furniture
In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet
This is a small bed is a table on a left, a furniture of television and the console of games, and a large table of 5 shelves.
the bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths
a small piece of furniture to fix on the wall where can we store the toiletries and something else
the kitchen is average, there is a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture
there is a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another shelf
Last year, I changed my apartment in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms, my mother's is bright. She a bed, a piece of furniture with a television, a small piece of furniture
In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet
This is a small bed is a table on a left, a furniture of television and the console of games, and a large table of 5 shelves.
the bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths
a small piece of furniture to fix on the wall where can we store the toiletries and something else
the kitchen is average, there is a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture
separate from the dining room there is a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another
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merci encore
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1. Réponse ayuda
good morning.. :)
I changed housing last year => we moved house last year.. (preterit - ok)
in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms ; my mother's is bright. => my mother has got a brighter bedroom than mine (comparatif)
her bedroom contains a bed, a piece of furniture with a television and a small piece of furniture . (pour info : commode = chest of drawers - placard = cupbaord) aucune consigne appliquée
In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet ther are a small bed, a table on the left, a television with a video games console, and a large table of 5 shelves. aucune consigne appliquée
the bathroom is white ; there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths ; there is a small piece of furniture fixed on the wall where we can store the toiletries and something else . aucune consigne d'appliquée
the kitchen has got an average size ; there are a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture .
there are a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another shelf .
il manque le present perfect..
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2. Réponse paule79
Last year I moved to another apartment.
My new apartment includes three bathrooms (That was my mother’s bright idea!), a bedroom, some furniture, a TV set on a low table. The hallway is also nicely furnished with a closet containing a shelf.
In the bedroom there are a single bed (lit à une place) with bedside table on the left side. There are also a television table and a games consoles as well as a desk with five drawers.
The bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths. There is a small piece of furniture fixed on the wall where toiletries and anything else can be stored.