Bonjour j'ai un dialogue en Anglais pouvez vous le corriger svp -Hello my friends! (J) -Hello Johan ( D et T) - How are you today ( J ) -I'm fine ( D) - I'm fi
Question
-Hello my friends! (J)
-Hello Johan ( D et T)
- How are you today ( J )
-I'm fine ( D)
- I'm fine too what dis you do yesteday ( T)
- I saw a report about screenaholic and I have were shoked
- Why
- Do you know in average the teenager would spend around five hours on sceen. And you girls are you sceenaholic?
- really! I think i spend a lot of time on my phone. I would say I spend 5 hours on my phone since I have had my phone for 10 years.
- And me I am as Doriana, a sceenaholic, according to me, since i have had my phone i spend 6 hours by week on it. And you Johan are you sceenaholic?
- ........................... And what did you do on your phone.
- ( La raison pour laquelle pouvez vous me donner la traduction) I use a lot my phone is because i have many application . For exemple Snapchat which serves me to send text messages to my friend. And this application permits also to send vidéos and pictures.
- I realized that, (we ou us ??) the teenagers are addited to new technologies .And i want to teenaneger spend less time in fronf of their screen.
- You are right. I need to reduce my time in front of all sreen
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse jannaali2018
- I'm fine too what did you do yesterday
- I saw a report about screenaholic and i was shocked
- since i had my phone for 10 years
- spend less time in front of their screen
- of all the screen
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2. Réponse nathea
Bonjour
- Hello girls !
- Hi Joan !
- How are you today ?
- I'm fine.
- I'm fine too. What did you do yesterday ?
- I saw a documentary on TV about screenaholics and I was shocked.
- Why ?
- Do you know that teenagers spend an average of five hours per day on screens ? What about you, girls ?
- Really ! I think I spend a lot of time on my phone. I would say about five hours per day since I have had my phone 10 years ago.
- I (le "moi" est en anglais un "stressed pronoun" .. Ce n'est pas comme en français. ils se contentent d'accentuer le I en parlant...) am as Doriana, a screenalholic, I guess ... I spend about 6 hours every week on it. (je ne sais plus si tu parles de "par jour" ou "par semaine"...uniformise ...)
- And what are you doing on your phone ?
- The reason why I use my phone so much is because I've got many applications. For example, thanks to Snapchat, I can send text messages to my friends and it also allows me to send videos and pictures.
- I just come to realize (/ou/ I have just realized) that all of us, teenagers, were addicted to new technologies. And I wish that from now on we will spend less time on our screen.
- You are right. We all need to reduce time spent in front of screens.
Fait sans site de traduction.... je ne te garantis pas un 0 faute ... mais je pense que c'est déjà mieux !!
bonne journée ☺☺☺