bo jour pouvez vous corriger la syntaxe et les fautes de grammaire merci​

                                     The terrible robot murderer

SAVE YOURSELF, IF YOU CROSS HIS PATHS...

On the planet Mars lived a scientist, George Helly. His biggest dream was to  capture robots. One day he succeed, he captured the leader of all these creatures and he tooke him to his laboratory to see the ability and intelligence of the leader. But he didn't know that the disesperance of it cause anger to all the other robots.

Suddenly, George's dream turned into a nightmare, the horrible machine woke up...

Tu a eu quelques fautes et une phrase mal dites. Mais tu as fait un très bon travail.